Wednesday, May 24, 2017

Titanium slow writing

WALT use a technique to carefully craft our writing

If I didn’t run away,  if I was smarter,  if i didn’t go to school then I wouldn't have superpowers. Frightened,Scared,horrified I thought I would never go in the school grounds again papers everywhere a smashed glass windows and there were holes in the walls my heart was pounding as fast as a cheetah my teeth were gritting I get up I walk down the creepy corridor I turn my head to the right and see a teacher on the phone I walk out of the reacted school.I angrily walked passed the black cop car and I nervously hopped onto the fast bike.
Clutching my phist,grazing my teeth,twirling my hair. I am alone……….

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